Friday, March 18, 2022

MissTaken: Ch2

 If you haven't read Chapter one, you may want to start here first.

Also, this page will have links to all the chapters as I post them. 


Chapter 2

Jessica continued northward through the night. The going was slow, she had to be cautious in the dim light not to step in holes. She had to be careful of the wildlife as well. Snakes were hunting rodents, and scorpions were out and about as well. What other poisonous, venomous, carnivorous or otherwise dangerous creatures lurked in the darkness? Spiders? Wild dogs? Big cats? And what about plants? Was she likely to stumble through a growth of poison ivy, or poison oak? This wasn’t her stomping grounds; she didn’t know the local flora and fauna.

The sky began to lighten, and a line of red appeared on the horizon, signaling the impending dawn, she crested another hill, and found herself looking down on a small town.

Jessica wasn’t sure if town was really accurate, but that’s the word that came to her mind first. It was a cluster of a dozen or so houses scattered in a clear-cut area, sort of surrounding an open area that might pass as a park. A dirt road passed through the central area as well, leading off in either direction. A few of the structures appeared to be concrete blocks, with tile roofs. Most however were a mixture of scrap wood, rusty metal, and thatch.

Jessica considered the rude little village thoughtfully. It wasn’t much, but it was civilization. Perhaps she could get some food, or at least some clean water to drink. Maybe she could even find a phone to call the police. If there was no phone available here, someone could surely give her directions to get to one. For some reason though, Jessica couldn’t shake off her uneasiness about the place. She worked her way toward the town cautiously, sticking to clusters of trees for cover.

Jess made her way undetected to the edge of the town and watched from a thick growth of brush as the town began to awaken. A young boy emerged from a house, a small dog at his heels. He picked up a stick, and the dog went wild, shivering in ecstasy. The boy threw the stick and the dog raced after it, barking madly. It picked up the stick and thrashed it about for a moment, then raced back to drop the stick at the boy’s feet. As the boy picked the stick up, the dog raced off in the anticipated direction the stick would be thrown. After a few moments, the boy was joined by another boy and two girls, engaged in an early morning game of tag.

A tired looking woman shooed a group of hens out of a doorway with a broom. Two older, weatherworn men greeted each other and sat together on a bench, exchanging stories while sharing a cigarette.

Jessica ducked deeper into the bushes at the sound of a motor approaching. A jeep drove into sight, carrying two men in uniforms. As the jeep stopped, the woman disappeared into her doorway. The passenger exited the jeep and strolled over to the two old men on the bench. He greeted them pleasantly, but the wary return greeting given by one of the old men suggested that this man was known to them, and his pleasant demeanor was a façade.

The reactions of the locals reinforced Jessica’s own misgivings. She tucked her head down, making sure her face was covered, and she drew her arms in front of her, covering as much of the bare skin as she could. She modulated her breathing, taking slow, shallow breaths to minimize any sound.

A man—probably the husband—came out from the same doorway the woman had disappeared into moments earlier.

The uniformed gentleman turned and greeted him. “Carlos, buenos dias! Como esta?” His voice carried as he spoke, as though he intended the whole town to hear.

Bien.” Carlos walked slowly toward the uniformed man, his gaze wary and hist steps hesitant as though he were approaching a coiled rattlesnake. “What brings you here so early?”

“A young woman is missing. Gringa, about five and a half feet, tan, dark hair with a hint of red. Very pretty girl.”

Jess froze, the man was describing her.

“No gringa’s here” Carlos shook his head slowly and shrugged his shoulders.

“Oh,” the uniformed man looked down, then off to the side, squinting.  “If you see her, you will be sure to hold her for me? She is the property of Los Caballeros Templarios. They are very concerned that she be returned to them in perfect condition.”  He paused. “I am certain there will be a reward for her safe return.”

He returned to the jeep and moved to climb in, turning back to Carlos at the last second, his brow furrowed in concern, “Of course, if something happens to her, and they think you are responsible …”, his voice trailed off ominously.

The woman, who had returned to the doorway gasped, she wrapped her arms protectively around a young girl about nine or ten years of age. Carlo’s eye’s were wide with terror as he looked to the woman and child, then to the other children.   

The man turned his attention to the two old men on the bench. “Good day gentleman,” He nodded pleasantly, a cruel glint in his eye, as he settled into his seat. His driver started the engine and the jeep continued through the town.

Jessica remained motionless.

“I suppose I should feel flattered. I wonder just how much I am worth to them?” she quipped to herself, in an effort to lighten her mood.

“Actually, it would be helpful to know.” It would give her something to use to estimate how wide a radius they would be willing to search—how many resources they would invest in her recovery. She was within the expanding search radius, and it was unlikely she’d be able to outpace it. However, on the upside, her trek to the town suggested she was in rural area with rugged terrain. Lots of forest and mountains would hamper search efforts and make it easier for her to stay out of site, even with the locals enlisted. The downside: she was ill equipped for an extended trek. Her gear consisted of the clothes she was wearing, and the few sundries she had pilfered from Miguel’s room.

What would the weather be like? How hot would it get here? The temperatures on the coast had been pleasant enough, but she had no idea how far they had been moved. Or in which direction. Still north of the equator she supposed, as the north star was still visible at night. Most likely still in Mexico, but no longer on the coast. Beyond that, it was anybody’s guess. She could probably learn the name of the town with a little sleuthing, yet since she didn’t know the geography of Mexico, it would bring her no closer to knowing her location.

Ixtapa, the town they had been abducted from was in southern Mexico, which was… what? Something like a thousand miles from the US Border? That would take somewhere around a month, assuming the weather was good the whole time, she didn’t have to stop to deal with blisters or other injuries, and she was able to consistently find sufficient food and water as she was going.

Water. The thought made her aware of her dry mouth and parched throat. She was going to need water, soon. She was going to need a way to carry it, and a way to purify it. Food would be nice too at some point, though that could wait a while. A few days, maybe even a week or two, if need be, though that would leave her low on energy, which would affect her strength, endurance, mood, and mental acuity.

She thought of her roommates again. Thus far she had kept a good mental note of direction and distance to return to them. The farther she travelled, the harder that would be.

And how long would they remain at that location anyway? Just long enough to get them ready to sell, she reasoned. A value had been affixed to her; she assumed the same applied to them. They were livestock. They were a product—an inventory to be moved. The longer you held onto it, the higher the cost and the lower the profit. She shivered at the thought of it, but that was the way it was. Simple economics.

Jessica clenched and unclenched her fists in indecision. She couldn’t leave her roommates, she had to help them. She couldn’t help them. How could she help them? She couldn’t….

She couldn’t stay here any longer. She was too close to the village. The kids, or the dog, would inevitably find her if she stayed put. She had to move.

Move where? Where was she? Where could she go?

Her abductors would watch the roads more closely, she reasoned. A college girl partying in a foreign country finds herself abducted. What would she do? Find civilization. Go to the police. So that is where they will look first. Was the guy in the jeep the police? She had no idea what Mexican police looked like. She had heard they were corrupt, that they could be bribed. She was advised to keep bribe money in her wallet just in case.

A friend had told her about visiting Mexico the year before. On the way back to the airport, they were pulled over and accused of speeding, her friend was certain the car they were in wasn’t capable of exceeding the posted speed limit. The police officer told her friend they would have to come to the station, fill out forms, go to court… It would be very expensive. Two twenty-dollar bills exchanged hands, the police left, and her friend made it to the airport just in time to catch his flight.

“Hey, God,” she said softly, glancing skyward as she moved through the brush, away from the village. “I am in a real pickle right now. I am feeling awfully alone, and I don’t know what to do. I’d really be grateful if you could give me a little guidance—point me in the right direction. And please, look after my roommates. I don’t see how I can help them, but I know you can.”

She slowly turned about, facing every direction briefly, hoping for some inspiration or impulse to guide her choice.

Nothing.

She looked back to the town. That would be the place to find supplies. It wasn’t very big, less than a hundred people. Not likely she could keep her head down and go unnoticed. Besides, she had no money, and even though her circumstances were dire, she still wasn’t keen on the idea of stealing.

Rustling sounded in the brush behind her.

She ducked into the thickest brush she could find. A young boy shuffled into view, eyes searching the growth around him.

Gringa?” he said in a voice barely above a whisper, looking around guiltily, “Are you there?”

Jess watched him uncertainly. How had he seen her? She had been so careful. He looked to be no more than 10 years old. A stick of a boy, with a thick head of straight, dark hair.

Gringa?” He whispered again, looking around nervously, “I have food for you.”

Cautiously she emerged from her hiding place. “How did you know I was here?” She asked.

Abuela,” He shrugged, “she said you were here, she told me to bring you this sack, and to make sure nobody sees me.”

“So… you won’t tell anybody you saw me then?”

He furrowed his brow. “Abuela would kill me.” He held the sack out to Jessica.

“How did your… Abuela know I was here?” she asked as the took the sack from him.

The boy shrugged again. “She knows almost everything. He turned and walked toward the village. “Good luck gringa.”

Gracias,” She called out to him softly. He didn’t look back. He returned to the village and resumed playing as though nothing happened.

Not wanting to take chances, Jessica hurried quickly away from the village—south, more or less—back the way she came. After several minutes she changed direction, moving west, then northwest, to circle the village. Her selected destination was a taller, heavily forested mountain nearby. She reasoned the thick vegetation and rough terrain would prevent vehicle travel, and she hoped that from that vantage point, she might be able to see something which would give her a clue as to where to go, or what to do.

Travel was over rolling ground, with trees growing in thick clusters, separated by areas of grasses. She remained in the trees when possible, and she sprinted in a crouch across open areas when there was no other option. Twice she had to cross narrow roads. Checking carefully for anyone who might be able to see her, she would sprint across and drop to a crouch in the bushes on the opposite side, listening for any indication she had been discovered. Satisfied that her crossing went undetected, she continued onward.

By noon, she was in heavy forest, which appeared to go unbroken now, all the way to the top of the mountain.

She paused at the base of the mountain to rest her legs. Her head ached. How long had she been awake for now? Apart from an hour or two of drug-induced unconsciousness, she guessed it was close to thirty hours since she last slept. That would explain the light-headedness. Her sweat-soaked t-shirt clung unpleasantly to her body. Her exposed arms were sticky with sweat and streaked with dirt. They were covered in small scratches from branches.

Jessica opened the small sack and examined the contents. A loaf of bread, a bottle of water, and a shawl. She broke off a piece of the bread and chewed on it. It had a nice aroma, a hard crust and a spongy middle. It must have been freshly baked that morning, or the night before. The bottle was a typical plastic bottle. The seal was broken. She stared at the water. It looked clean, but there could be parasites in it. Reluctantly she set it aside.

The shawl could help protect her bare arms and neck from the sun but would probably be too hot to wear. It might come in handy if temperatures dropped at night.

Jess examined her arms; she could see redness of the early stages of sunburn. She needed to do something about that right now. She retrieved the bottled from the sack again, opened it, and poured a small amount on the dirt at her feet. She mixed the dirt and water with her fingers until it was a thick mud, which she spread over the exposed skin of her arms, neck, and face.

Jessica shook her head to clear a wave of dizziness that passed over her. She was beginning to feel the effects of forgoing sleep the previous night now. She would need to find a safe place to rest. She needed to keep a clear head. Sleep would be crucial.

She closed the sack and continued onward, moving carefully through the thick vegetation. She planned to reach the summit a few hours before night fall, giving her a chance to survey the surrounding area, and plan her next move.

The going was slow, the vegetation was considerably thicker and lusher than the high desert areas she normally hiked with her family. She had covered hundreds – maybe thousands of miles of Utah desert land over the years. Hiking and camping had been part of her life as far back as she could remember.

Halfway up the mountain, she paused to catch her breath. Glancing at the sky through the canopy, she caught a glimpse of the sun. It was lowering already. She bit down on her lip and gazed at the forest in front of her. The chance of her making the summit by nightfall was slim.

Jessica abandoned that effort and began the search for a safe place to sleep. What would be safe here? The area was teeming with life. She had been listening to the cacophony of bugs, birds and who knows what else most of the day. No doubt activity would pick up at night as the various nocturnal dwellers awakened.

The forest had been mostly oak trees. As she climbed higher, there were increasing numbers of pine and fir trees. Not the skinny lodgepole pines she was accustomed to, these were large trees with wide bases, bunched impassably close together. She selected a particularly imposing grouping of such trees which would provide cover and restrict the movement of larger predators. Using the SOG, she began hacking off several smaller branches. She moved enough greenery to create an entry to the base of one of the largest trees in the grouping.  Ants scurried up and down the trunk.

Fire ants? She had heard of them on the news and knew they could be deadly but had never seen them. The news reports had been From Texas, would southern Mexico’s climate support them? Even if they weren’t fire ants, they’d be poor bedmates.

Better find a different place.

She moved to a smaller cluster of trees. Pushing in among them, she found a small clearing. It was mostly bug free. The trees, while smaller were still large enough and thick enough to impede the passage of larger creatures, she thought. Cutting more branches and using the smaller pieces of rope she had taken, she fashioned a very rough, very makeshift lean-to shelter. It wasn’t as good or sturdy or protecting as the ones she and her brothers made when then were camping out on the ranch, but it would serve. She cut several younger boughs and laid them in the bottom to serve as a bed.

Now, what to do about nighttime critters? Fire was a good critter repellant. It would also be a great beacon for anyone looking for her. The surrounding trees might provide a sufficient screen.

Jess poked at the earth with the tip of the knife, testing how easy it would be to excavate. The blade slipped though the ground easily, so she kept going, an idea forming.

She would build what Grandpa Hansen called a Dakota fire hole.

He had showed her how to build them once on a hunting trip. The fire would burn nearly smokeless, and the light would be difficult to see, even from quite close. She had asked how he learned to make it, and he had mumbled something about Indian lore learned from the pioneers and passed down through the generations. That meant it was probably something he had learned, or at least used during the war and didn’t want to talk about it.

She hurriedly dug a hole, roughly a foot in diameter and a foot deep. She then moved a foot away and dug another hole, this one a smaller tunnel, angling down to connect with the first hole at the base. She gathered some dry pine needles and small twigs and placed them in the bottom of the larger hole. Scouring the surrounding area, she found several larger, dry twigs which she broke to uniform, one-foot lengths. She constructed a tee pee in the hole, centered over the pile of twigs and pine needles. The needles and small twigs were the tinder – they would catch fire and burn easily. They would generate enough heat and flame to catch the larger twigs – the kindling - on fire, which would then catch larger logs on fire. She collected and cut a few chunks of wood for this purpose, trying to estimate how many it would take to keep the fire going through the night.

Now she needed a way to start a fire. No problem, she had built fire bows before with her dad. She selected a couple of chunks of wood with flat surfaces, and one straight, dry stick roughly one foot long and a little thicker than her finger. She cut a sturdy, but slightly flexible branch, and tied a piece of the smaller rope to each end, like a bow with a loose bowstring.

Jessica used the knife to dig a small divot in the larger piece of flat wood, then dug a similar divot in the smaller piece of wood. She chopped at the edges of the smaller piece, taking off sharper bits and shaping it until she could hold it comfortably in her hand.

She cut a point on one end of the stick and placed the point in the divot on the larger piece of wood. She then looped the rope of the bow around the stick. Gripping the smaller, flat piece in her left hand, she placed it on the top of the stick, with the end in the hole she had carved. She gave a few experimental draws of the bow. The looped rope rolled roughly, turning the stick. A few more practice-draws, and Jess began to increase the speed.

The friction wore the ends of the stick and the divots, so the stick moved more smoothly, spinning clockwise and then counterclockwise as Jessica drew the bow back and forth. Before long, small tendrils of smoke began to appear where the stick and divot met. She continued to draw the bow as the smoke increased. In the dimming evening, she could see a small red glow. Quickly she tipped the board, knocking the glowing embers onto a file of dried pine needles and dry grass she had prepared. She scooped up the pile and the embers and gently blew on it. More smoke appeared. The embers glowed brighter with each breath, then between one breath and the next, a flame appeared. She carefully blew a few more times at the base of the flame, feeding it more oxygen, then dropped the burning mass into the hole.

The wood in the hole caught fire, drawing oxygen through the tunnel.

Jess pulled the plastic bottle full of water out of the sack and examined it. She removed the cap and gently squeezed the bottle until the water was right to the rim. She replaced the cap tightly. Examining the bottle once more to be certain there was no air left in the bottle, she placed the bottle into the fire hole.

Her dad had boiled water in a paper cup once.

“The water reaches a temperature of 100 degrees celsius and stops,” he explained. “Paper doesn’t burn until over 200 degrees celsius. The water keeps the paper from reaching that temperature, so the water boils, but the cup doesn’t burn.”

Sure enough. The top of the cup burned, right down to the water line. And that was it, the water boiled in the cup. Jess didn’t know the melting temperature of the plastic, but she was confident it was higher than the boiling point of the water. She would leave it in for an hour or so—that should make it safe to drink. Maybe she’d leave it overnight. Couldn’t be too careful.

In the last bit of evening light Jess gathered a few more handfuls of wood to keep the fire going through the night. She ate another piece of bread, and then tied the sack in a tree away from the lean-to. So as not to invite any hungry critters that might smell the bread directly to her bed.

She would have to do something about water tomorrow. That would need to be top priority. She would need about a gallon of water every day to stay hydrated. She laid down under the lean-to and fell asleep.

She dreamed of the day she left for college. Her car was loaded, and she was hugging each member of her family. Joseph, her sixteen-year-old brother was of two minds. He was sad to see her leaving, but he was also eager to move into her room. Thirteen-year-old Sam and twelve-year-old Elizabeth were bickering with each other—they were always bickering.

Five-year-old Emily, her baby sister, was crying.

Jessica hugged Emily close.

“Don’t leave me! Don’t leave me!” Emily cried.

“I’ll be back to visit, baby,” Jessica reassured her. Emily had been a surprise addition to the family, and since Mom had been diagnosed with cancer not long after she was born, Jess had stepped into the role of mom for Emily. “I’ll see you soon, I promise.”

The image morphed in the dream. Emily began to stretch, her long, straight, blond hair began to curl and turn flame red. Eyes shifted from blue-grey to emerald green. Her voice became deeper, richer, as she repeated “Don’t leave me!”

It was no longer Emily she was holding. It was Meredith, her roommate, pleading.

“I’ll see you soon—” Jess woke with a start, her cheeks wet with tears, and her promise echoing in her mind.

“Heavenly Father, please help me,” she cried. “Please help me! I don’t know what to do. I don’t know what to do. I’m so alone.”

She buried her face in her hands and sobbed.

Monday, March 14, 2022

MissTaken



An arm at her throat cut off her scream, and her captor’s sinister voice broke into her mind . . .
Jessica Hansen, a small town, farm girl, is persuaded by her friends to go to Mexico for spring break.
An encounter with some local boys at a club leads to them being drugged and abducted.
Taking advantage of good fortune and quick wits, Jessica manages to escape. But …
Can she stay free and survive in the wilderness of a foreign country? Is she able to navigate the treacherous terrain, and dangerous wildlife?
Can she outwit the relentless traffickers?
Will She find a safe way home?
And what about her friends?


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And below are links to the first eleven chapters:

MissTaken

Ch 1

Ch 2

Ch 3

Ch 4 

Ch 5

Ch 6 

Ch 7 

Ch 8 

Ch 9 

Ch 10

Ch 11 



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12 October Update 2: I believe this is the final update on this post: The Paperback is still in review. The eBook has already released, and is available. I have an author page, where the eBook and the paperback are (or will be) accessible. 


12 October Update: I pushed the "publish" button a few moments ago, for both the eBook and the Paperback. It indicated it will take approximately 72 hours for the review to be complete, before it goes live (assuming they don't find anything they want altered). This is soooo exciting!!!!  (I will note, that at that time the Kind eBook status was also "In Review", so maybe it will be faster than 72 hours... *fingers crossed*) 


11 October Update: The proof looks great. I am meeting with my publisher tomorrow to finalize the e-book format and press "publish". I'm not sure how long after that before the Paperback shows up - I would think fairly quickly. They indicated the e-book would be available 72 hours after publishing (So, the 15th?). I will post links here as soon as I have them.

10 October Update: The Proof has arrived! I will try to complete the review today or tomorrow, and get it released, before the end of the week.

3 October Update: The files for paperback have been uploaded to Amazon KDP, and the proof has been requested. The publisher estimates a one-week turnaround for that. So... Maybe two or three weeks to go, and it will be available? 

27 September Update: Front cover is done! Back cover design is in process. I am hopeful I will be able to publish in October. 

23 September Update: Round two of cover edits is underway. I am hoping to make a final decision on cover and get it back before the end of the week (tomorrow). 

18 August Update: Typesetting is back! Hopefully I will get it reviewed and approved be end of next week. I also received draft covers, so that will be underway as well. 

26 July Update: I am a week and a bit late with this update. Typesetting is underway. Not going to make my July goal, but still progressing...

21 May Update: I signed a contract with the UK publisher. We are on our way to published. July might be a bit optimistic; we shall see.

13 May Update: I might possibly have a publisher! A small outfit in the UK, but reasonably priced, and they appear to be very helpful to first-timers like myself.  And I remain 100% owner. very exciting!

6 May Update: The search continues, but I am running out of rocks to turn over. Starting to dig into the self-publishing now...

29 Apr Update: I'm contacting every agent I can find that a) sounds like a good fit for my story and b) is accepting submissions. So far only one callback, which turned out to be a publisher with a very well reported, bad reputation. I see a few consultancies that will help me through the process - for a price. A little nervous about that...

22 Apr Update: Done with the edits! Yeah! Now I just need to find an agent, or a publisher. Fingers crossed... 

16 Apr Update: Still staying on track. I should finish the edits next week. Then I can focus on finding a publisher (anybody good friends with a publisher? Wanna send the link to them?). If I don't have a good lead by June, I will see if I can figure the self-publishing route out. I am going to aim to have it available in some format by July at the very latest.

19 Mar Update: So far, so good. Still on track. As of now, the view count for chapter one is at forty-six,  999,954 more to go...

Saturday, March 12, 2022

MissTaken: Ch1

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Publishing status: (When I get it published, I will include a link here). Editing finished for 12/24 chapters.

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MissTaken


Ch1


Jessica Hansen was just starting to awaken. A weird, unnatural grogginess pervaded her mind. It saturated her limbs, leaving them sluggishly lethargic.  Her brain obstinately rebuffed her efforts to direct her thoughts. Fragmented memories swirled around in her head, slowly coalescing; her first year at college, her roommates. Spring break in Mexico. Loud music and dancing and drinking. So much alcohol, but not for her—she didn’t drink. It kinda made her uncomfortable being around it, but at least her roommates got back to the hotel safe every night.

Except, not tonight.

She’d gone to dinner with her roommates, and when they passed a dance club, they’d insisted on going in for “just a few minutes, to see if anyone famous was there.”

The bouncer eyed her critically when the three approached the entrance. She didn’t look like she belonged with the other two. Sarah was positively stunning in a forest green, fit and flair mini dress and matching stilettos. Meridith’s white halter top and pencil skirt were not quite as bold, but grabbed attention nonetheless, and highlighted her green eyes and her thick, red hair, cascading down her back in loose curls.

Jessica was wearing comfortable jeans, a navy tee shirt, and mid-top hiking shoes.

“You’re in the wrong club senorita!” the bouncer yelled over the blaring music. “The cowboy bar is down the street!”

“I’m just here to babysit my friends!” she quipped, and he let her in.

They met three boys that night—local guys, kinda cute. They all said they were between nineteen and twenty years old, though Jessica was suspicious they might be a bit older than that. They were all on the tall side. The youngest one had friendly eyes, and a big smile that proudly displayed his perfect teeth. His dark hair was a carefully styled, messy look. His skin was flawlessly smooth, and his eyes had a look of perpetual amusement. He was an easy conversationalist and had a disarming charm. The other two appeared to defer to him, despite his younger age and smaller build. They were more reserved, their gazes more intense, they gave off a definite macho vibe with their close-cut hair and dark stubble.  

Her roommates were really into them, but she’d been annoyed. Why?

Her head ached liked she’d taken a nosedive off a spooked mare. Her mouth was dry.

Oh yeah, the guys really pressured her to drink. Like, a lot. They badgered her until he was ready to knock one of them out, then they finally backed off, and got her an orange juice. It tasted a bit funny, but not like alcohol.

A voice in the back of her head told her she shouldn’t be awake right now, so she lay very still, waiting for the grogginess to go away of its own accord.

The persistent rumble of a roughly running motor, seemingly right behind her head intensified her headache. Her mind tried to rationalize the presence of the motor noise—She didn’t remember leaving the club. She strained her ears trying to pick up the incessant thump-thump of the club’s techno music. A mild wave of nausea passed over her and her thoughts scattered again.

Voices caught her attention. Somewhere beyond her feet, the boys from the club spoke in Spanish. She hung out with the ranch hands a lot and managed to pick up a fair vocabulary. As her head began to clear, more words were recognizable.

One described in crude terms stuff he wanted to do to a girl. Was he talking about her? Then there was another voice–not one of the boys. Older. He was yelling and threatening the boy. He spoke fast. A lot of words she didn’t understand, but she caught the word “virgin” and “money”. The implication was that she was a virgin and was worth a fortune and he better keep his hands off her or he would lose them along with his head and possibly a few other extremities.

Her head pounded. Something was definitely wrong, but she couldn’t keep her thoughts straight long enough to make sense of anything. Someone moaned softly next to her, her shoulder was jostled as a body next to her shifted.

“One of them is waking up!” A voice said, “Should I dose her again?”

“No, we are only thirty minutes more to the ranch.” the older voice said. “Hit her with a shot of the trainer, we’ll give her an early start.”

There was a sound of shuffling, and something bumped roughly against the bottom of her shoe. Something brushed against the outside of her leg, and there was another soft moan, and more rustling sounds as something next to her was moved. Another bump against her shoulder was followed by a short, soft little cry. Jess carefully opened one eye just a bit. She recognized one fuzzy outline as Sarah, with another fuzzy person holding her up a bit. She risked opening a bit wider, a syringe came into focus, stuck in Sarah’s arm. Sarah’s eyes rolled back, and she went limp. The other person set her back down.

Jess fought against the waves of panic breaking over her, she focused on her breathing, keeping it slow, quiet, steady. She concentrated on her limbs, willing them to remain still and relaxed. She diverted her attention away from what happened to Sarah and focused on making sure it didn’t happen to her.

The vehicle jolted, throwing her head to the side. She let it happen as smoothly and naturally as she could. She chanced peeking out of her left eye, which was now concealed from above by her nose. Her head was clear now, as was her vision, she could make out the filthy interior of a van. A small backfire drew her focus to the motor again.

When she was younger her father would play a game with her and her siblings to pass the time whenever they were stuck near a road or parking lot, which they called guess the motor. They would close their eyes, listen for a passing vehicle, and try to guess what it was by the sound of the motor.

As she listened now, she easily identified the distinctive, rhythmic sounds unique to the air-cooled motor used in a Volkswagen Bus.  She was on the floor in the back, on the driver’s side of the van, with her head near the back. She knew Sarah was directly to the right of her. Was Meredith here as well? On the other side of Sarah perhaps?

Her wrists were bound with rope, in front of her. Her forearms rested over the front pockets on her jeans. A little downward pressure confirmed her pockets were empty—someone had taken her wallet and phone. Her ankles were tied together as well. She surveyed the small section of van floor she could see without moving her head. Several crumpled food wrappers, some dirty rags, lengths of rope, a couple of hypodermic needles—likely used. Near her left hip rested a stray razor blade. A fortunately timed bump rocked her whole body, twisting it to the left and giving her the opportunity to drop her hands to the van floor, directly over the blade.

She hooked her middle fingernail under the edge of the blade on one side, while pressing her ring finger lightly against the top. She eased the blade to vertical and pinched it between her fingers.

Another jarring jolt rolled her to her back again. She managed to keep her grip on the blade, and using the fingers on her other hand, she shifted the blade‘s position to conceal it better between her index and middle finger.

Jessica remained still as the minutes passed, jostling on a rough, bumpy road, punctuated by an occasional moan from Sarah. Jess focused on keeping her eyes closed and remaining relaxed and ragdoll loose so as not to betray her conscious state.

The vehicle stopped and the motor cut. Doors creaked in protest as they were opened. The muffled sound of men talking and laughing became clearer and the sliding door on the passenger side slid open with a rough, scraping sigh. It was much like the banter among the men at the ranch as they moved bales of hay from truck to barn.

“Mer.” Sara’s voice was slurred, “Where’re you going?”

Sarah’s body shifted away from Jessica. When hands grabbed her ankles and pulled her, twisting her body on the floor and dragging her toward the open passenger door, she fought the urge to scream and fight. She forced herself to remain limp as she was hefted onto someone’s shoulder like a feed sack.

“Not her.” a voice said, “she goes up to the house, put her in Miguel’s room. Juan, go with him, tie her to the bed, and stand guard.” He spoke louder. “Anybody goes near that room, you shoot them. I’ll be up to get her later, and if she isn’t still untouched – If I find even a tiny bruise when I get there, I’ll take an axe to your cahones. Comprende?”

The man she lay on shifted, spinning her around. Her body bounced under his footfall. After a short walk, she heard the click of a latch, followed by the creak of a door opening, The sounds of footsteps on stone changed to footsteps on wood floors. A series of upward jolts punctuated by a faintly hollow sound with each footfall informed Jessica she was being carried upstairs.

Jessica chanced opening her eyes briefly. Juan was apparently leading the way as nobody was behind. Jessica realized if they tied her hands, they would likely see the razor blade. Carefully, but quickly she lifted her hands to her head and gently slipped the blade into her mouth, biting down gently on the edge of the metal to prevent it slipping in her mouth and cutting her. She returned her hands to their dangling posture and closed her eyes just as they reached the top of the stairs. Another door opened, and then she was lowered onto a bed.

One of the men lifted her arms, slid a rope between them, and then wrapped and tied it around the ropes already binding her wrists. He pulled her arms over her head and tied them to what she assumed was the bedpost.

What if they tie my legs to the bed as well? Her stomach tightened in panic. How would she get the razor to her hands if she was trussed up?

A hand skimmed the front of her shirt, and again she fought the instinctive urge to tense up – to scream. The man began to apply pressure when the distinct click of a revolver being cocked reverberated around the room. The hand froze.

“Easy Juan, it’s just you and me.”

“Yeah, and if he so much as smells your stink on her clothes, His axe makes me a eunuco. Walk out of this room now so I don’t have to get yelled at for splattering your brains all over Miguel’s bed.”

“Okay, Okay man. Chill.”

Jess breathed a quiet sigh of relief as the two men left and the door closed. A lock clicked into place, followed by a dragging sound of wood on wood. She guessed Juan had pulled a chair in front of the door and posted guard.

Cracking her eyes, a bit at a time to confirm she was alone; she surveyed the room. It was a modest sized room with a door into a balcony and opulent furnishings. The bed frame was a heavy, dark-stained hardwood, with intricate carving work. A small bedside table, a desk and chest of drawers also adorned the room, each of similar material and workmanship, with intricate gold inlays around the edges. She guessed from the décor—posters of rock bands, movies, and scantily clad women in provocative poses, some of which appeared to be autographed—that Miguel was a younger man in his late teens or early 20’s.

The room started to go out of focus, and the edges of Jessica’s vision darkened. She realized she was panting.

“Oh, good one Jess,” she murmured softly, “first moment you get to yourself and the best idea you can come up with is hyperventilate and pass out.”

Jessica closed her eyes and focused on taking slow, deep breaths. In through the nose, hold it, out through the mouth, she repeated the mantra in her mind, counting six seconds between each action. She had learned this breathing technique at a workshop the university had set up as part of freshman orientation. It was presented as a means of managing anxiety before an exam. She nearly laughed out loud at the thought of comparing her current predicament to that of taking a test.

Jessica opened her eyes again. She could only see two options open to her at the moment; wait to see what happens next or try to escape.

Might as well work on option two, she thought, it’ll pass the time while I wait for option one.

She examined the rope around her wrist. It was braided nylon, about a quarter-inch thick, which was wrapped around her wrists five or six times and tied in a square knot. There were no loops between her wrist apart from the thicker rope which tethered her to the bed post. It was looped once and tied to itself in a slip knot.

She flexed her wrist experimentally. The rope had a little bit of stretch to it, but she couldn’t quite wriggle her hand free. Shifting and squirming, Jessica scooted her body toward the head of the bed until her hands could reach her mouth. She gingerly extracted the razor blade. She worked it around to where she could bite down on the back edge, holding it firmly between her teeth with the blade protruding in front of her lips.

She rotated her hands and brought her wrist closer until the nylon ropes about her wrist rested against the exposed blade. She moved her wrist side to side, dragging the rope across the razor. She applied a little more pressure and was rewarded with the hiss and pop of tiny nylon threads being severed. She continued slicing at the coils of nylon braid while the minutes ticked by.

A noise came from outside the door, and she froze, holding her breath in dreadful anticipation for the door to open and for Juan to discover her attempting to escape. The door remained closed. Relieved, she resumed cutting.

 After cutting through the first few coils, she was able to loosen the bonds sufficiently to pull her hands free. She untied the rope around her ankles, then coiled it and stuffed it into a back pocket of her jeans. She crammed the bits that held her wrist into the other back pocket, and then collected the rope used to tie her to the bed. It was a thicker, twisted rope, maybe 12 feet in length. She coiled it around her waist and tied it off like a belt. A knife and rope were the number one and two items on any survival essentials list. Her family camped a lot, and survival fundamentals were well ingrained, particularly since her brothers fancied themselves as mountain men.

You’re alone in enemy territory Jess, A voice in her mind said. You better look around and gear up for a long, lonely trek.

She retrieved the razor blade which she had dropped on the bed once she was free, and she placed it in the small wastebin standing next to the desk, taking care not to let it drop or clatter. She quickly explored the room, looking for anything which might help her. Miguel had a liking for cowboy culture. His closet was full of jeans, western style shirts and cowboy boots, though many of them looked altogether impractical, spattered with sequins and rhinestones and other extravagances.

His collection of cowboy accessories was not limited to clothes. She found a few pairs of garish spurs, which would be useless for actual horse riding. There were also a couple of gaudy cowboy hats. A hat would protect her head from the sun during the day, but these hats were as attention grabbing as a disco ball.

On the corner of the desk rested a familiar looking knife. Her brother Joseph collected knives. One of his favorites was the SOG Seal pup.  It was nine inches long with a metal handle and five inches of blade, the two inches at the hilt serrated. This one was in a durable nylon sheath with a flexible strap system on the back for attaching comfortably to any variety of belts, harnesses or backpack straps. A small strap with a snap wrapped over one finger guard, holding the knife securely in the sheath.

Jessica picked the knife up to examine it. She tugged at the strap and the snap released with an audible click, which seemed to echo in the room. Jessica winced. She looked at the door, then glanced around the room, frantically looking for a hiding place. The door remained closed.

Stupid! She silently berated herself. She relaxed slightly, and returned to her examination of the knife, removing it from the sheath to observe the condition of the blade.

She would have preferred a standard pocketknife— something light, easy to carry, and easy to conceal; something she could use to cut rope, gut small game, or make tinder shavings. This knife was a bit bulky and not quite as versatile. But any blade was better than no blade. And the large blade would work for batoning, so there were some pluses.

She returned the blade to the sheath and fastened the strap, wrapping it in the hem of her shirt first to muffle the sound of the snap. She fastened the sheath to her belt and continued her search. How long before they came for her? She needed to hurry.

Jessica crept to the drawers, grasped the top-drawer handle and inched it open, keeping the rough rasping of wood against wood as muted as possible.  In the drawer she found a pair of socks that looked like they would fit her.

“Wet feet are bad news on a long hike.”, she recalled her father saying once as they were packing for a weekend family outing, “Always make sure you have an extra pair.”  

Further rummaging turned up a deep navy bandana. She wove the socks into the rope around her waist, and she tied the bandana around her neck.

As she inched the drawer closed again, she heard the measured thud of footsteps on stairs. Abandoning the drawer, she tiptoed quickly to the balcony doors. She reached for the handle, turning it with measured slowness to avoid the slightest noise. Once the latch retreated into the door, she pulled it open and peeked out.

The balcony was dark and stretched the length of the house. Several doors led to the balcony—she assumed from other bedrooms. Crouching, she padded softly to the railing and peered through the bars. A couple outbuildings lay to her left, all dark except one. Three or four men with rifles wandered about near the outbuildings, though they seemed less than alert. Given the drive time, they were likely in the middle of nowhere, and their job was more a formality than a need.

Off in the distance to her right she could make out another man, also armed with a rifle. He wasn’t a concern, but the dog at his side was. That could complicate things considerably. It was difficult to tell from a distance, but the size and shape reminded her of a pit bull.

On the bright side, it’s not a hound, she thought. He’d be trouble if he heard or saw her, but once she was clear of the property and in the trees, he’d be fairly easy to elude. Terriers were fast, ferocious beasts. They were great for protection, and they had been popular among early settlers and pioneers for that reason. They’d rip small varmints to shreds, and they would even face down a cougar or a bear to protect their family. But, while they could be decent trackers, she hadn’t known anyone to train them for that job.

She skulked left along the balcony, until it wrapped around the house. Carefully she peered around the corner. The van they arrived in—an old Volkswagen bus—and an old pickup truck were parked in an open area, just past a walk, which went around a large fountain and up to the house. Beyond, a narrow road disappeared in the darkness among the trees.

This must be the front of the house, she concluded.

She continued along the front of the house to the other corner. Looking out, she could see only empty, open space for maybe twenty yards, then trees. Peering over the side, she couldn’t see or hear anyone below.

If she could get down here, the house would be between her and the dog—at least for now. She assumed they were probably patrolling, so that might change.

She quickly swung a leg over the railing. Grabbing hold to the corner post, she lowered herself down, until she was hanging from the post. Her heart was threatening to break out of her chest.

It’s just a game of fugitive, she told herself. She had played fugitive in the dark with her brothers and friends often during the summer. She talked her college roommates and a number of people from other dorms into playing a round last fall as well. It was a cross between tag and hide and seek. A few people were selected to be the fugitives and the rest would be cops. A starting point and a destination were selected. The fugitives got a two-minute head start and raced on foot to the destination. The cops got to use cars—or bikes when she was too young to drive, and their objective was to chase, find and tag the fugitives before they got to the destination.

Her brothers added a twist to the game by giving the cops nerf guns, so they could shoot you from a distance.

“Yeah,” Jessica whispered, “you’re just playing fugitive.” She tried not to think about the real guns the men were holding. She glanced around quickly to be sure she was alone, then released her grip on the post.

She crouched as her feet touched the ground, to absorb the impact and minimize the noise her landing made. She froze briefly, listening for any sound of alarm.

Nothing.

Staying crouched she half walked, half ran across the open ground to the tree line. She picked out the north star, low on the horizon in front of her. There was something soothing about finding it. Anytime she was outside with her dad after dark, he would always point out the north star. She habitually looked for it anytime she could see stars in the sky. It was an anchor in the night. She chose north as her direction of travel because America was north. Home was north. It was a fairly stupid reason to pick north, but, she had nothing else to work  with.

She picked her way through the vegetation as quickly as was safely possible, constantly checking her bearing against several overhead constellations, to ensure she didn’t accidently circle back.  The half-moon gave her just enough light to pick out the trees and large bushes, but not enough for her to be easily seen.

After several minutes the terrain in front of her sloped upward. It wasn’t terribly steep, but she had to force herself to keep moving, each step becoming harder as the adrenaline coursing through her body diminished. Before long she found herself cresting the ridge of a modest hill, panting and struggling to bring moisture back to her dry throat.

 Turning back, she could see the ranch below. There appeared to be a fair amount of activity on the grounds, beams of flashlights flitted about. They must have discovered she was missing. She looked at the small outbuilding and thought of her roommates. She had left them behind.

“It wasn’t a choice” She reminded herself. Trying to get to them, and then get them out in their drugged state would have only caused her to get caught.

“I’ll come back for you…” She promised. Then dropped down the other side of the hill.


My Bucket List Book

 I have wanted to write and publish a book since I was in sixth grade. Over the years I have made several attempts to write a bookI have four or five books started now, ranging from a spiralbound full of notes, to a handful of incomplete chapters.

About four years ago, I was playing with words. Looking for a word that could be separated into two or more words, which would make a good story (yeah, I know... "Nerd!").

Anyway, the word 'mistaken' came to my mind. 

'miss'. 'taken'.

And an idea sprang to life. A young woman, taken by traffickers, escapes and survives in the wilderness.

No, it wasn't inspired by the Taken series. The books that inspired the story were "My side of the mountain" (I think. It's been so long since I read it, I might be mixing it up with something else) by Jean Craighead George, "Flight of the white wolf" by Mel Ellis, and "Deathwatch" by Robb White.

More than that, it became a vehicle to pay tribute to several young women I met over the course of my life. They were all farm girls, raised in small towns. They were all incredibly kind, humble, patient individuals, most with strong spiritual convictions. They were also all very resourceful; never afraid to take on whatever new task was thrown at them (Automotive repairs, IT work... you name it)

The main character in this story is an amalgamation of their qualities, someone I hope readers will be able to be inspired by- a heroine, who can reasonably be emulated.

The story largely wrote itself - It only took two years from inception to completed first draft (which, for me is an amazing feat).

Then I was stuck. I had no idea how to get it published. 

I received advice from a couple published authors (thanks, Facebook friends), and took a first, unsuccessful stab at finding a publisher. 

Then I identified an editor and paid for her services. She gave me loads of advice, which I have been working on for over a year now (to be fair, I worked on it for a month, got sucked into life's problems and let it languish for nearly a year, and just picked it back up two months ago).

I am halfway through now. To celebrate this. I am going to publish the first few chapters on my blog. Then I will take another stab at wooing a publisher (definitely not something in my skillset). If, by the time I complete the edits, I still have no publisher, I will take a stab at self-publishing, probably on Amazon (I am open to advice of course).







Wednesday, February 2, 2022

Reasoning: Narratives, Models and Constructs

 (This post is part of series of posts, beginning here. It is recommended they be read collectively, and in order.) 

I kind of thought the last post would open the floodgates for this series. Not so. There are a series of ideas which I want to explore, but they are so intertwined that I am struggling to determine the correct order to present them, in order to progress to a complete, coherent end point.

I think perhaps a couple more definitions are in order next:

 

As previously noted, reality – truth is likely beyond our ability to comprehend. We don’t actually live in reality.

We – each of us – have and live within a narrative we have constructed based on the paradigm we have composed, and the perspectives from which we observe the world.

Narrative – The story we each inherently create in our attempt to understand reality from our limited perspective. This story can be created intentionally, or unconsciously. It can be influenced by others, by events, by experiences, and it in turn influences others, and can even shape future events.

As an example of the latter point, Consider the following two studies:

Mind over milkshakes” -Individuals were given an “ordinary milkshake”, but were either told it was an indulgent milkshake, or it was a low-calorie milkshake. Based on what they believed about the milkshake, their Ghrelin (a hormone that influences appetite) levels were influenced. If they were convinced the Milkshake was high in calories, they experienced a higher satiation of their appetite. If they were convinced it was a low-calorie milkshake, they were less sated. Not just at the level of their psychological perception, but at the physiological level.

Mindset matters: Exercise and the Placebo effect – In this study, convincing Hotel room attendants that the hard, exhausting labor they did every day was in fact healthy exercise, caused them to experience physiological improvements in weight, body mass index and blood pressure.

 Whether you believe this phenomenon is the result of faith calling down power from heaven, or the result of the universe manifesting your deepest desires, or simply the result of the placebo effect is – for the purpose of this conversation – irrelevant. The fact remains – regardless of the cause – your beliefs, your narrative can literally shape the future.

 

Model – The universe is a big, complicated thing, even if you set aside the claim, they we can’t actually see it for what it really is. Our brains are- relatively speaking - rather limited. They can only focus on a few ideas at a time. Furthermore, we can only understand or define things through comparing them to other things or concepts we already understand:

“What is a clementine? It’s a citrus fruit. It’s similar to an orange…”

“What is hot? It’s the opposite of cold…”

This is part of the reason complex or abstract concepts are such a challenge for us- each person has a different understanding or definition of these simpler terms, (Cold can mean something very different to someone from Arizona, and someone from northern Sweden).

To wrap our head around new and/or complex concepts, we use models- a simplified, analogous object, system, or concept which allows us to focus on a particular aspect of characteristic of the actual thing we are attempting to understand.

We – Us, our bodies, are incredibly complex ecosystems. We are composed of various cells created using a genetic blueprint, specialized to perform a variety of unique tasks. But there are even more components- bacteria and viruses – which are also a part of that healthy, functioning ecosystem, which exist and operate independent of our genetic code. The entire system is too large and too complex for us to observe and understand. So, we create models to work with manageable bits of all that information.

For instance, we often refer to the body as a machine. A machine is a fairly well defined and simple concept- a collection of interconnected parts which work together to perform some task. That’s an easy way to understand how the skeleton, muscles and tendons interact to walk, run, jump, lift, carry, etc… We can understand the machine’s need for fuel, and therefore understand the role of food, of calories.

We also model it as a computer sometimes – A kind of machine that takes inputs – things we see, hear, taste, feel, etc., uses some algorithm to make a decision based on those inputs, and then delivers some output (we touch a hot stove, we “feel” pain, and we quickly move to put distance between ourselves and the source of that pain”).

Models are useful, but they are ultimately only models, they aren’t reality, they approximate some aspects of truth, but they are not truth in and of themselves. Sometimes we forget that.

 

Construct- a construct is something we create within our narrative. A model or collection of models, which we collectively use to navigate the complexity of reality. Constructs are not reality, though we often treat them as if they are. They are a mass illusion. Frequently useful but ultimately ephemeral. Below are some examples:

 Money is a construct – It is a useful way to handle the complex transactions of a complex society, but ultimately it has no real value. In a society of two or three people it would serve no purpose. They would simply work together and share resources to ensure their collective survival. We use it because those transactions of sharing resources, time and energy are so complex, and involve so many people, that little scraps of paper, or metal coins, or even bits of data in a computer are a useful way to keep track of those transactions.

What if tomorrow, 99% of the worlds’ population decided to no longer recognize the US dollar as having any value?  Or if the 99% of the population decided diamonds no longer had value and were no longer desirable? Many fortunes would disappear in an instant. Sure, many would still be wealthy due to the goods or services they hold or produce. Those whose wealth was solely in dollars or diamonds would find their circumstances radically changed.

Society is a construct – Businesses, towns, cities, states, countries… They only exist because we collectively permit them to exist. They are convenient- providing a sense of order and collective security, but they are not necessary and can be dissolved as readily as they are created. There are countless anecdotes of individuals who have become disillusioned with society and have abandoned it, either turning to the life of a hermit, or in engaging in active efforts to disrupt and destroy society. The former we observe with curiosity or amusement, the latter we incarcerate, to protect the construct.

Government is a construct – What if tomorrow, 99% of the US population agreed together to no longer recognize the US president, the Congress and the Supreme court as having any authority, and instead chose to recognize Bjorn - a carrot farmer from Norway – as King of the United States? Overnight those people, would become irrelevant (and many would likely become homeless in short order, given their reliance on political prestige for their wealth).

Their power over us is a collective illusion, which must be maintained by one or more of the following mechanisms

1.       Tradition – “This is how it has always been and will always continue to be.” (We humans like the familiar and fear the unknown. Even if we don’t like the person currently in charge, that is still preferrable to burning it all down and starting over). Change is uncomfortable and generally avoided.

2.       Charisma – The “cult of personality” effect. This can be the result of competence, or con artistry. They must do their job well or at least make us believe they are doing well. Or convince us the other option is far worse. (Note: Understanding this sheds light on certain characteristics of modern government. Our nations are large, populous, and complex. Nobody is likely to be sufficiently competent in a sufficient number of facets of managing such a system to be able to do everything necessary well enough to retain our confidence. Hence the ever-falling ratings of most, barring some stroke of luck with respect to current events. Thus, Modern leaders tend to obtain their position through “handshaking” and then retain it through “vote-buying” or through divisive, fear-based messages about the “evil others” who would “destroy the world as we know it”.

3.       Force – This is really just another facet of charisma but deserves separate treatment. A leader can attempt to maintain authority through a show of force – through intimidation. This however is also an illusion. Again, if 99% of the population reject the leader, the leader will not have sufficient resources to subdue the population.  In the very worst case, said leader might have sufficient resources to compel the masses to choose between submission or death.  The leader's Success still requires a sufficient number of the masses to collectively accept the illusion. Failing that, said leader will either be subdued, or will be forced to drive the unwilling masses to extinction, in which case he is left alone, with none to lead.

 There are a number of other rather critical constructs which deserve attention. They will be treated separately, in later posts. For now, I believe the above is sufficient to lay the framework for what is to follow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sunday, January 2, 2022

On "Science" and Vaccines

 I intended to wait on this post until I was further along in the "Reasoning" posts, as it would have been a useful example later. It would probably have been less ranty, had I waited as wll, but, like the mathematician in the joke I shared a few posts ago, I seem to have hit my threshold.


"The Science" does NOT say a vaccine is safe and effective!

Politics says this!


Science does NOT declare a pharmaceutical "safe".

Science says: (Note, this is a made-up example. A real one would be considerably longer)

"Out of 1000 people who took this drug in a laboratory-controlled trial-

  • 1 person died
  • 5 people experience severe hair loss
  • 20 people experienced temporary loss of bladder control
  • an additional 10 people experienced permanent loss of bladder control
  • 150 people experienced migraines which lasted up to 4 weeks after taking the medication.



Science does NOT declare a pharmaceutical effective.

Science says: (also, a made-up example)

"Out of 100 people in a double-blind, laboratory-controlled study, 58 experienced a reduction in symptoms, as opposed to only 48 in a similar study using a placebo."

(Note, if you consider that carefully, that means the above medication actually works for 10 out of every 100 people - 48 of them would have gotten better using anything which they naively believed would make them better. I have seen medications with even lower efficacy rates which are considered "effective")


You are NOT following the science when you arbitrarily force an entire population to take a medication.

You are NOT following the science by spending millions of dollars trying to coerce people into accepting your stance 

Spending that money to research what types of people are likely to experience the various side-effects, now THAT would be following the science. Then you would be able to have the medication safely and voluntarily utilized by a higher population, with fewer instances of fatalities or life changing injuries. You might not even have to create a special court in an attempt to protect pharmaceutical companies and manipulate public opinion.

You ARE following the science when you ensure the entire population has adequate access to accurate information regarding the efficacy and risks, so that they can individually make an informed decision based on their personal history. 

(But of course, to do that, the population- or at least the majority- would have to trust you, which would require that you behave in a trustworthy way...).



*End of rant.

Disclosure: I am emotionally invested in this subject- not just because I am a proponent of individual choice and accountability, but because I appear to be a recent victim of such policy. I had covid and have historically had a proclivity to side effects from medication, therefore I was disinclined to be vaccinated, based on my risk vs. benefit analysis. My employer opted to move quickly in support of the Biden mandate, and I was therefore compelled to be vaccinated. Shortly after taking the vaccine, a number of symptoms have manifest, including Tinnitus (A constant, maddening, high-pitched shriek in my ears), random joint and muscle pain, and potentially a return of chronic fatigue and reduced immune function (a bit early to tell on those, I really hope I am wrong.)

Certainly, it is fair to say I can't prove the vaccine was the cause. It COULD be absurdly coincidental timing. "I can't say for sure the gunshot caused the bleeding, but I wasn't bleeding until after I got shot".